vanilla and spice

Jun 30, 2013 17:17

Title: Vanilla and Spice
Pairing: Himchan/Daehyun, bff!Banghim, hinted!Jonglo
Rating: PG-13
Length: 7100+ words
Summary: College!AU. Himchan is a dick, Daehyun is unlucky, but maybes and what-ifs are sometimes all it takes. With a little help from Bang Yongguk, Yoo Youngjae, and hormonal teenagers.

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length: oneshot, rating: pg-13, fandom: b.a.p, pairing: himdae

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vonegirl1 July 1 2013, 18:38:00 UTC
So cute. Who doesn't know of someone just like Channie in this one? Avoid, deny and bitch until your voice breaks! In the end all you want to say is, "Now doesn't that feel better?" Thanks for the post.

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akmongs July 8 2013, 11:29:59 UTC
I know right? And I can see Himchan going all 'feline mom' in real life too lmao
Thank you for reading! ♥

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tcaramel July 2 2013, 18:53:08 UTC
lol at this "You touch yourself when you're drunk, hyung" <--- himchan touches himself when he's not drunk in real life too, geeze his grease. This was cute and funny and light hearted! :) I read your note at the end and I think you did a pretty good job with the college setting even though you are unfamiliar with it. There were only a few things where I was thinking, is this high school or college but who am I to think lol not all colleges are the same. I really like the yongguk and himchan friendship here it kind of makes me want more general bap fics! I'm always here for himdae, they are my dirty second favorite himchan pairing kekekekeke
I know this is weird, but I always notice it right away. When you are using quotations for speech you need to put punctuation at the end (either a comma or a period or w/e) to finish it off! o.o

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akmongs July 8 2013, 11:50:28 UTC
Thank you so much for this comment omg!! ♡ Made me feel better about the whole college thing, since I tried to keep it as vague as possible. All I know of college!AUs comes from other fics I read lol

I wrote banghim just as I think they are in real life too, you know? The characterization just came without effort, so I'm glad the result was good (himdae should be everyone's guilty pleasure tbh)

Thank you for pointing it out omg, I never know how it works with punctuation in dialogue, so I'll definitely keep it in mind!

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hawk_fry July 3 2013, 00:20:33 UTC
Junhong and Jongup being bad dongsaengs lol

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akmongs July 8 2013, 11:32:52 UTC
Tsk tsk tsk bad donsaengs (but in the end it's all thanks to them, if you think about it, so yay for hormonal teenagers jonglo, good job b''d)

Thank you for reading!

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lonelyexo July 4 2013, 15:28:14 UTC
i'm smile upon this simple story.
you're great author-nim!!!

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akmongs July 8 2013, 11:34:04 UTC
Thank you for commenting and making me smile! ♥

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k3yandlock3t July 5 2013, 14:12:56 UTC
i love himdae so much omg my heart
this story was so cute and funny i just TT~TT

"Himchan had this feeling gnawing at him everytime he teased or insulted the younger. The internet called it guilt. The internet also said that by constantly offending the other, he was just trying to hide his latent affection and desire to be with him. Himchan hated the internet."

weeps at the amount of feelings i have right now
this was wonderful !!~ ♥ you write so well

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akmongs July 8 2013, 11:37:49 UTC
Thank you so much for your comment, omg I'm really glad you liked the fic~

Sigh I love himdae so much too?? Those fuckers are climbing up my otp list so fast ew go away

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