♥ 000 ♥ Crit and Contact

[akumaindisguise]

Just your standard Hows my Driving post.

Comment here with constructive criticism. How's my take on Chomesuke? Good, Bad? Please no wank or flaming. The last time I got wanked on I just about gave up rping on live journal ._.;

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Comments

[gottheclap]

I'm going to try and make this as polite as possible - however I mean this as constructive criticism. Please keep this in mind and listen with open ears.

It's very difficult to see where you got your take on Chomesuke from. I understand there's not much canon for the Akuma, but mixing anime and manga effectively mixes two different characterizations. In one, the Akuma is more like an average person with emotions, and reasonably terrified of the insurmountable odds against the Exorcists. To that sort of reasonable "human", the Exorcists' do-it-or-die methods appear insane Your Chomesuke took that slight attitude of self preservation and turned it into a basis for making everything about herself and turning all situations around to be about her. Furthermore, anyone who senses the Akuma is an Akuma and displays the least bit of distrust gets the beaten-puppy attitude that comes across as trying to get to the character. Chomesuke comes off as a subversive manipulator rather than a human personality that sees the world around her as

[akumaindisguise]

Half of the DR players left because of the whole upset with Cedel. Can't blame that on me.

And if you really meant everything you said here you wouldn't hide behind a mask. I consider this a random anon comment with very large words.

[false_smile]

While its a fair point about Cedel, I know six players that dropped their Lavis to avoid your Chomosuke. I'm one of them. You were fun to thread with until the guilt game and selfishness came into play because Lavi wasn't flirting with her.

I do mean every word I say and I was behind anon because I've seen what you've done to players you were aware of that in game reacted to your Chomosuke. Are you going to take all this seriously because I've revealed myself or dismiss it all?

[akumaindisguise]

When was the last time you even threaded with her? Things change ya know.

What I've done to players? Those who dislike my muses I avoid... Because they dislike them. Everyone wins. If they don't tell me I don't know.

[rubberbandsnap]

I'm sorry, I made this too long and have to split it into two comments. However, I feel these are all necessary points to make

[rubberbandsnap]

I don't like her points system with the Cross's. I think it's disgusting the way she plays favorites. Chomosuke should be loyal to canon Cross who she considers hers, she should not decide she likes this one better so she's going to follow his orders. She doesn't have to shun all the others, she can still play with them and like them because they're Cross. But it is truly awful the way she decides one is better than the other because he spends more time with her. It pressures the other Cross muns to play with you when they may be busy or not want to and it's simply a terrible thing for a person to do

[akumaindisguise]

Oh fun thing to wake up to. Okay, lets see

[rubberbandsnap]

I’m sorry if it upset you, but if you put up a concrit post you have to expect criticisms, especially if you’re serious about improving. Mostly I commented here because I didn’t want the only honest feedback you have to be from the anon meme, where everyone gets crazy wrapped up in wank and forget it’s a real person they’re talking about who can be hurt by their bitching