I don't know who these characters are but it mattered not at all. This is a gorgeous story.
I love your writing, your detail, both the artistry [eg: The chirp of crickets through the night is a soothing sound. It is especially so when running from the hustle and bustle of everyday life. Being an artist is no easy feat. ] and the physical situation it captures (apparently) so effortlessly... I shan't quote an example because that is your entire story, so realistic that it evoked camping memories, and the feel, the smells and sounds, the cold nights, and the burning heat of the fire.
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! So far, the only actual character from the show is the naked girl, so don't worry about not recognizing anyone. I fullheartedly recommend Kyle XY for anyone looking for something to watch. Unfortunately, it was cancelled back in 2009, but that's what fanfiction is for!
I'm so happy my imagery comes across. I actually miss camping so I had a nostalgic moment myself. :3
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I love your writing, your detail, both the artistry [eg: The chirp of crickets through the night is a soothing sound. It is especially so when running from the hustle and bustle of everyday life. Being an artist is no easy feat. ] and the physical situation it captures (apparently) so effortlessly... I shan't quote an example because that is your entire story, so realistic that it evoked camping memories, and the feel, the smells and sounds, the cold nights, and the burning heat of the fire.
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So far, the only actual character from the show is the naked girl, so don't worry about not recognizing anyone. I fullheartedly recommend Kyle XY for anyone looking for something to watch. Unfortunately, it was cancelled back in 2009, but that's what fanfiction is for!
I'm so happy my imagery comes across. I actually miss camping so I had a nostalgic moment myself. :3
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