[one-shot] - Deeper than words

[akuro_tsuki]

Title: Deeper than words
Author: in_monochrome
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Kaoru x OFC
Disclaimer: Pure fiction.
Comment: I haven't written something in English since months and this fic is actually almost about a year old now, so don't expect highclass literature or something. I've changed a bit about the 'plot', but I still don't really like it. That might be

Comments

[drpaccy]

You can't honestly expect me to be coherent after this! XD
Dear, there's nothing about this that you ruined! I absolutely adore it. There's such a fantastically needy mood to it, and the language you use is just beautiful. Very... intense :) I'm sorry I can't express myself with more words but I really, really like it :D

You know what? I was having such a shitty day today, I haven't felt this miserable in months... and then this pops up on my f-list. Maybe it took you a while to finish, but you posted it just in the right time! XD Thank you so much for this! Keep writing, dear, you really have a talent for it ♥♥

[akuro_tsuki]

Haha, I've read it so many times over and over now that it keeps me kinda numb xD
I think the part sanghamyers wrote saves it from fail. I'm not so sure about my whole writing style at the moment, because I've written so much in German lately and writing in English feels like such a reverse now. *sighs* But I'm so, so glad that you liked it! That really means so much to me!

And I'm even more glad that I could make you feel a bit better. *hugs very tightly* Yeah, maybe that's the reason it took me almost a whole year XD
You're more than welcome, dear! And thank you so much for your words ;~; ♥ Makes me feel better too.

[scwolf_10k]

This was brilliant *___*

If I wanted to highlight the parts I liked most, I'd be highlighting the whole thing.

Well done! 8D

[akuro_tsuki]

Oh, thank you very much xD
Now you make me blush a bit. I'm glad that you liked it! Though personally I still don't like it *shot*

[surmise]

I don't really like the whole first person writing style, but I really like how you brought it out here, so yeah xD; Props to you ♥ VERY NICELY WRITTEN IN OTHER WORDS :O@I#J:SDLFK :O

[akuro_tsuki]

Heh, thank you very much xD;
I'm glad you liked it! ♥