Fic: Seeing Red (1/1)

[alafemmefatale]

Title: Seeing Red
Author: alafemmefatale
Theme: #41, Fire, for the Tony/Pepper 100 Theme Challenge
Rating: PG-13
Length: 2,000 words.  One-shot fic.
Summary: Pepper wears red.  Tony takes notice.
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Self-discipline had never been one of his strong points.  When he worked ceaselessly in his basement for days at a time, it wasn’t out of self-discipline

Comments

[backporchpoet]

Tony watched her intensely, waiting impassively. But the moment passed and she shook her had...

had=hand. That's really the only error I could find but oh goodness, I really adored this. It's just the right amount of sultry steamy with banter thrown in. It also doesn't hurt that in my mind Pepper does these little things to torture her boss on purpose. I'm really becoming a fan of your writing. This was fantastic in all ways.

[destro]

Okay, that was just adorable. Witty, charged banter is a perfect way to end my night, so thanks for that :D

[thiefofcamorr]

then turned back clean his burns with rubbing alcohol

Maybe a 'to' in between the 'back' and 'clean'?

Other than that, I love this and would gladly kidnap you and force you to write for me every day \o/ This was excellent.

[missyvortexdv]

So hot and deliciously described, really wonderful.

[silentpheonix]

“Practicing your jazz hands, sir?”
Complete and utter win!

This was all kinds of wonderful things but I love that it was hilarious. :D