Jilyna: The Beginning ((NSFW))

[alaias_stories]

Fog. Thick and stifling. She felt as if she'd been stuffed into a bale of cotton, as if nothing existed but that pale, cold almost-white greyness around her. For a moment the silence was deafening. The silence was maddening and she rubbed at her eyes and her ears as if she thought she might just be going blind and deaf that morning.

And then she

Comments

[halogin]

Oh man. This is both a horrible and really good story. I do hope you understand what I mean by that.

*hugs Jilyna*

[alaias_stories]

Yes, I know what you mean. :)

And thank you! I was a little uncertain about posting this one so it's nice to know that someone read it. And liked it! So thank you for reading! :)

[romelia_wra]

Oh, that poor little girl. v.v

[alaias_stories]

:(

FYI.. I DO have happy people. They're just all Alliance. Or cows. :p

[vorrick]

Iiiinteresting. It'll be neat to see where this goes.

[alaias_stories]

I have to decide if she's staying a paladin before it goes anywhere. Or if I need to remake her as a warrior. And possibly find someone to play a part or two.

[setheaus]

Oh my, I think you did a wonderful job with this. The imagery was very, very good if not chilling. Keep on writing about her!

[alaias_stories]

I'll try!

And thank you! :)

<3