Debts, Dates and Denial Ch 13 (Charlie/Shark, NC-17)

[alassenya]

In which Charlie realises that Rory is a stubborn git with no common sense whatsoever.

For introduction, warnings and disclaimers please see Chapter One.

Comments

[jacqui_hw]

I read the whole thing last Saturday and have been waiting all week for that. Such a good story, I love it.

[alassenya]

Thank you - I'm always happy to acquire new readers! And now you're making me feel guilty because I haven't left a comment at painted_whiskey for ages. I certainly wish that I could write as easily as you do!

[jacqui_hw]

Um, I don't write painted_whiskey. Hehehe.

[alassenya]

*facepalm* I meant badgersbahookie!!!

Didn't you used to write Captain Dom as well?

[msilverstar]

I do like this, works really well. Do you have a tag or index I can point to for links?

[alassenya]

There's no index as such, but if you click on the "ddd" tag all the chapters should come up. Every chapter has a link to Ch 1, and there's a link from that to Chapter 2; Chapter 2 links to Chapter 3 and so on. DDD Ch 1 is also linked in the memories, under "Alassenya's Fiction".

[divinemadam]

What is it with men denying that they are sick or in pain and having to put on a brave face?

You know what? It's awfully hard to stay detached and in denial about your feelings when you are face to face. The sex was hot and personal this time. Both men are going to have to some issues with it. Probably Rory more than Charlie since Charlie has been denying things for a few days.

Liam offered to embezzle money for Dom. How sweet but wrong. I still don't like Liam. One small bout of conscience doesn't make things better.

I em enjoying this so much. Thank you!

[alassenya]

Oh yes, issues will arise. Though you will not be surprised to find that at least one of them is very good at denying the very existence of such issues!

I don't like Liam either, and it actually annoys me, because of all the characters he is the least rounded. I just can't write him sympathetically. (Bizarrely, I now find I understand JKR's plight. I have been complaining for years that her Lucius and Draco are one-dimensional, and now I know why - it is almost impossible to write a fully-developed character that you don't like. The fact that I like Draco is immaterial. She doesn't, and so she can't write him as a three-dimensional complex person.)

[owlgrey]

Now that was a fuck to remember!

[alassenya]

Just you wait... there's lots more before the story ends. Ch 16 is a real scorcher. *fans self*

(and thank you for being so nice about my mistake)

[owlgrey]

No hassles...easy done.

[surreality_fan]

just got caught up and am now dead from teh hot.

[alassenya]

You think that was hot? Wait till you get to Ch 16. I've just been tidying up a scene there and it even made me get warm in intimate places.