The Rabbit and the Dove....

[albercht]

Before I begin this, I would like you all to know that I'm still working on it. I just wanna get this down before I forget it. Also, if you have any constructive comments you would like to make, please do so. I you are an asshole, like the last fucker that left a comment with out leaving a name...which i know, and will not revil...then you can go

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A Winner Is You!

[neff]

It wouldn't stand as a short story, but as a beginning to something, whether it be a book, setting for a game, mood setter for something else, it would be quite good. I liked it. However, there were so many spelling mistakes, I would have to see a copy I could write on and correct. Good job.