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[albertibassman]

I've taken up poetry again, I've written three poems this week.  I'm proud of myself.

Pills

Take one pill and you get nothing,
Take two pills and you start coughing.
Two pills later your head will spin,
Two more pills and you're sure you're gonna win.
Pill number 8 and you think you feel great.
Three more down and you then start to frown.
Your stomach

Comments

[rekindlinghope]

I like! Order of liking:

1. Stuck
2. Pills
3. Gone

Very morbid, but very artsy and cool. You are growing as a poet.

[albertibassman]

thank you mommy!! im gonna miss you soo much when you go...=( call me often!!!!

[ibhater]

I really like Gone.
You showed me Pills.
In your handwriting.