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[albiej9]

and this is why i hate TCNJ:

"His butt spread in the chair,
a pair of lopsided balls in an old mitt,
weather worn, sunbaked, permanently creased.
I heard the pfshawf
when the air squeezed out."

try writing a peer analysis on that garbage.
so disguting i'm almost sick.
that class is the biggest pice of trash i've ever taken in my life.
so beat.

Comments

[ambulance_____y]

you arent looking into it enough,
obviously its a metaphor for the writers thought of life.

[albiej9]

well, yapes, how about you give me a detailed analysis.

[ambulance_____y]

you're the one going to school. not me.

[andyandmicaulyk]

i don't want to ever read that again.
haha that's so bad.

[albiej9]

i know. i still shake.

[bullettobinary]

it clearly means
the retrospect of the inner equality from one beings life to the next differs from the disproportionate excess of the filth the man feeds us.
if you were to use that, you would get an A, maybe an A+.

[albiej9]

you use retrospect incorrectly when you talk about the future, i think you might mean observation, or something of that ilk. otherwise, you need to explain the man better, do you mean like corporate culture, politics, your father? It's just convoluted, otherwise, that analysis is an interesting take, much better than yapes'.

[ambulance_____y]

i dont know anything about poetry, and deffinitly was serious about that.

also, joey grabbed my butt today.

[albiej9]

only after you expressed a desire to my body, plus, it was your thigh, fool.

[radicaledward12]

that was pretty gross.

[_lostidentity]

Oh wow, I just realized you never update this thing. What do you have against updating it, hmm?
Yeah, well this is Sean and I've made a new journal... Add me as a friend or comment whenever if you wish. That's all for now,
til next time.

[_bloodfeast]

wherierjtydkytjtiyuaiosekerk

EW.

hehe but i love you.