Lazaret (Kept Woman Verse)
Title: Lazaret | Part 2
Characters/Pairing: Maya/Gabriel, Peter, Nadia, others.
Fandom: Heroes
Rating: R
Word count: 5, 554
Disclaimer: Do not own.
Summery: Nadia goes missing and they have to find her before it's too late.
Note: Kept Woman Verse. Three or four more parts to go. Unbet'd.
Parts: 1, 2, 3
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O_O all this Maya/Peter touching is making me ship it! No, I love this tactile writing. :D
Okay, you know what. I love this. I love that you fit all these comforting touch moment in here between Maya and Peter. I understand it. I know it's not sexual, but I know Maya probably misses this so much. Peter is falling right into line with the twin ability and it's believable because that's who Peter is. He was a nurse for goodness sakes! I love that it's in his nature to heal and comfort and touch. It just feels to nice to read it in this story. And it's so different from what Gabriel used to do. Most of his touch was taking (or Maya felt it was) and Peter's is giving. And I love that Catlin is there too and it's not an issue because Peter and Catlin love each other, so it's not even a thought. LOVE!
But if she is sick...O_O Nadia! For shame! you're sinister like your dad. tsk ( ... )
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She totally snuck in there. I thought her story was interesting, the agent in charge of finding Sylar but then she disappeared. I did wonder what happened to her...
lol they tease each other but that's as far as it goes. I'm glad you brought up the touching and Peter sort of being a brother substitute. In this story he and Maya touch freely but now it's like there's a wall between her and Gabriel. Things are different.
Nadia: she's not going to be unaffected by his problems, that's for sure but it's not to late for her. Kids can be a total bully at 10 but at 20 become completely selfless.
lol poor thing. I think she's scared and what started out as wanting some attention is beyond her now.
Thank you!! :D
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