This Part Seeing her like that brought all kind of memories back: the first time he ever saw her, her look was the thing that impressed him the most, like she already know him from inside out; Pandora’s party, how he first saw her fragility and her need to tell someone about the shits in her family, their first kiss, when she met him halfway in the lake because she wanted that kiss as badly as much as he; their first time, when she wanted to feel something and he made her feel love; the final choice; her return from Italy when she clarified him she wanted him and him only; her suicide attempt and how he felt empty like he was dying himself.
THIS SHOULD HAVE BEEN THE ENDING. gah. i loved it ♥ i hate how they could have just ended it with freddie leaving the room after anthea comes in, like cut right to credits it would have been fine but no, just UGH. *sadface*
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Seeing her like that brought all kind of memories back: the first time he ever saw her, her look was the thing that impressed him the most, like she already know him from inside out; Pandora’s party, how he first saw her fragility and her need to tell someone about the shits in her family, their first kiss, when she met him halfway in the lake because she wanted that kiss as badly as much as he; their first time, when she wanted to feel something and he made her feel love; the final choice; her return from Italy when she clarified him she wanted him and him only; her suicide attempt and how he felt empty like he was dying himself.
Made me tear up, It was lovely!
Freffy Forever, :)
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I mean that would be so much better than what we really had.
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I like your end muuuuuch better!
I really love it actually. ♥ You should write moooore! ;)
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i hate how they could have just ended it with freddie leaving the room after anthea comes in, like cut right to credits it would have been fine but no, just UGH. *sadface*
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