Jate Fiction

[ale_la_pazza1]

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[ladywilde80]

OMG

So gorgeous, I had to literally wipe the tears from my eyes so I could read.

That was lovely, utterly lovely - my heart aches at the futility of it all and yet, knowing that Jack and Kate will be together again made me smile.

You captured the tragic and heartbreaking nature of their relationship perfectly.

Kudos.

[ale_la_pazza1]

Thank you so much *hug*

I cried a lot writing this, seriously. They're so heart-breaking, and tragic and yet perfect in their own way.

[lala_bb]

OHH MYYY..
*sobs*
I'm sure that if there's one thing that would haunt Kate for the rest of her life would be the fact that she wasn't there by Jack's side through his last moments. You portrayed this AMAZINGLY! My heart was totally in my mouth at the moment she jumped, I totally didn't see it coming! And I love that Sawyer let her go!
And their last conversation, oh goshh, made me ache! But at the same time it's beautiful that he knew that he would "see her again".
Would love to read more!

[ale_la_pazza1]

I think Kate's will always "blame" herself for not being there when he needed her the most, but they both had a mission, and fulfilling those missions is what gave them their chance after death.

When she jumped, I kinda thought she was a little insane, cause she jumped off a plane completely UNPROTECTED, but she grasped her chance, she had no time to find a parachute or else.

I loved Sawyer there, he knows that pain, and he does the unpredictable: he lets her go.

The last convo is so *bawl*

[passionjate]

Aww this is so awesome and tragic! I love it <3

[ale_la_pazza1]

Thanks bb!