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ale_la_pazza1

Fic: Wounds (1/1)

Sep 08, 2010 18:03

Title: Wounds
Characters: Kate/Jack, little appareances from other characters.
Rating: PG
Summary: Kate's pov during the finale if she had been pregnant
Notes: Thanks to Steph for reviewing it & giving me the idea for this!

( “I saved you a bullet” she says angrily when she shoots him. Nobody can touch her man, not if she has anything to say about it. )

fanfiction, lost, jate

Comments 4

suntanglory September 8 2010, 16:15:49 UTC

"He pulls her closer and for a second her not-still-showing belly touches his mortal wound, and it’s somehow poetic how the baby, this new life, touches the point that is sucking the life out of his father."
oh fuck, that part gave me shivers.

I'm sobbing like crazy right now, damn you. ;__;

ale_la_pazza1 September 8 2010, 16:35:56 UTC

Ada, everyone is swearing at me, what did I do so bad? LMAO.

irishunicorn03 September 10 2010, 23:53:45 UTC

I love the fanwank that Kate was pregnant.

It 's a small moment, but it's one of my favorites; the heartbreak on her face as she stands there just watching him just tears my heart out again and again. So the twist you've put on it, just makes it even more heartbreaking. If that's even possible.

Everything about this is beautiful.

ale_la_pazza1 September 11 2010, 19:12:11 UTC

Thank you so much :)