Fic for NotMcShep AU Challenge

[aleana15]

Dawn was creeping over the horizon at a lazy pace. Elizabeth tucked a wisp of hair back behind her ear and breathed in deeply. She loved the smells of dawn; the cool, musky air rising up from the forest below brought scents of the river that ran just a few yards away from the cabin. She loved this time of day; for a few hours she could pretend

Comments

[victoriaely]

This is very nice. I was expecting for Carson and Elizabeth to stay together, though ^_^
You captured Elizabeth's feelings very well.

Great start :)

[aleana15]

Well you never know what may happen in the future....lol

Thanks alot - It's being worried about not getting the characters right that makes fanfiction such a challenge for me.

I'm really glad you liked it :D

[lil_aber_lisa]

well you know what i think of it, i love it, and defintiely want to see more of this story

lisa

[aleana15]

Thank-you! And thanks for readng through it.

I'll have to have a good think about a continuation...and perhaps find a role for Rodney ;)

[jifferhorn]

What a great first fic! This isn't a pairing that I've read much, but I find myself wanting more! I really enjoyed the rich descriptions... it was almost like I was there with them. :-) Thank you, and I look forward to a continuation! ;-)