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[aleathiel]

And so the good news is that with excellent and instructive commenting from

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[aleathiel]

No worries! I know what that's like. And no doubt there will be other times the fic needs beating back into shape comments.

[aleathiel]

Hehe, not guilty, at least not this time! I don't know who wrote that fill.

There's definitely a longer fic coming eventually. It's 7k already and I've only done the one scene! And yes, I was lucky to get some excellent feedback. This may only be a relatively small fandom, but there's some brilliant writing talent, which is just great.

[carmarthen]

naninande wrote it: http://unliterati.livejournal.com/24811.html

[sineala]

Hooray! I am bad at fixing people's stories, but I am glad other people could help you!

[aleathiel]

They were a great help :) And you need to be writing your epic story, not helping with mine, so that's fine!

[carmarthen]

Hooray, I am glad it is back on trackish, because it will be awesome!

[aleathiel]

Haha, I hope so!