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aleksiina_26

Moonlight Flowers_Chapter 2

Feb 04, 2013 11:50

Moonlight Flowers

Chapter: 2/?

Rating: NC-17 overall.

Bands: Alice Nine, The GazettE, some OCs

Pairings: very fluid pairings, mild Tora x Shou in this one.

Genre: AU, angst, supernatural

Warnings: male x male, violence, suggestiveness, group sex, non explicit blood-play, adult themes, foul language.

Summary: Can two rival vampire covens learn to ( Read more... )

supernatural, alice nine, crossover, angst, vampires, chaptered, fanfiction, violence, au, the gazette

Comments 18

lunapastilha February 4 2013, 19:50:13 UTC

djwefherfhrfhjfjfvrn!! how can you say nothing happened?!it is great (although i´m a little bias with your stories gomennnn!!). You have developed the story, you have created a path for what comes next. Instead of "look at me i´m a story and i´m going to throw myself in here"lol! i really like it and i´m thrill to know what comes next!!

hugs hugs hugs and pez dispensers lol!!

aleksiina_26 February 8 2013, 16:47:33 UTC

Well, I do like to build up my plot lines when writing chaptered stuff so I guess its not like NOTHING happened, but there wasn't much action...I'm glad you liked it ^_^

*hugs* thanks for reading! *eat all the candy* xoxo

yuugurekirakira February 5 2013, 01:05:16 UTC

Eeee, loving this! I wanna be Fumiko lol XD I like the balance of her innocence and motherliness, and she illustrates well a different kind of dichotomy between pleasure and purity. I love how she's ~ruined for other men~ by virtue of her being brought up in a loving household of flawless-faced monsters, because damn, I would be, too XD ( ... )

aleksiina_26 February 8 2013, 17:01:27 UTC

Hmmm, I think Fumiko embodies all of my own personal fantasies, who wouldn't want to be the well cared for meal of a few gorgeous vampires xD She definitely is an interesting character, lots of duality in her, and that whole balance between being heavily protected and sheltered, keeping her innocent, and yet exposed to pretty high levels of sensuality will be interesting to play with ( ... )

puss_nd_boots February 5 2013, 02:52:00 UTC

Character development isn't exactly nothing happening, and there was a lot of it in this fic. Especially regarding the relationship between Tora and Shou - you can see thr beginning of a soul mate relationship, but also that it will not always be easy. In fact, I can see him flat-out rebelling.

I also love the relationship between the boys and their servants, how the young girl actually led a normal teenage life when not being a food source for vampires. And I liked how things that would seem sensational in the hands of other writers - the group situations, the feeding - seemed easygoing and natural here, just flowing from everyday life. For them, it IS everyday life.

I'm eagerly awaiting the arrival of the rivals in the next chapter! ( I even have an idea of how a Vampire!Kai would look - this picture, an early GazettE image with one of the hottest Kai looks this side of Before I Decay: http://gazepic-a-day.livejournal.com/126001.html )

aleksiina_26 February 8 2013, 17:10:50 UTC

True that, its not like absolutely nothing happened, but this wasn't a high action chapter xD I had to build up on their very complex bond, because they are very reliant on each other yet their bond is the most fragile and tenuous of them all. They'll have to cater to it if it has to hold ( ... )

himenojigoku February 5 2013, 04:31:19 UTC

Hmm a little smut~❤ :) Well I think background information and the establishment of relationships are important to a story. It's one of the main components so don't say nothing really happened! lol I'm guessing the rival coven is the Gazette so I can't wait to see how you write them as vampires (^_^)

aleksiina_26 February 8 2013, 17:14:49 UTC

I just had to write a little porn, couldn't help it xD It wasn't especially explicit but the smut is still to come hehe ^_^

I agree, plot setting is really important, its not like nothing at all happened but it wasn't exactly a high action chapter xD

The rival coven will be making its appearance in the next chapter, I hope you like my take on them ^_^ thank you so much for reading! xoxo

xme_chanx February 5 2013, 18:12:55 UTC

I'll probably leave a better comment later, but *q*

You've just managed to shroud tora in even more mystery, and I can't wait to see more of his backstory.
I love the way the coven interacts, with Tora still considering himself an outsider, except with the humans... it's very nice <3

NEED MOAR. xD

aleksiina_26 February 8 2013, 17:18:01 UTC

Tora is still struggling with the whole concept of being a vampire pretty much. A vampire is a well bred, refined animal, a predator, and Tora is still too human in his mind to embrace this nature, yet, he might be the most animalistic of them all. Its an interesting duality that I'm looking forward to exploit more.

Working on chapter number three today, so you shall get MOAR! xD Thanks for reading xoxo