Lost luau ficlet: Rub me raw

[alemyrddin]

Title: Rub me raw
Character: Jack, mentions of Sawyer
Words: 250
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Lost is not mine.
Spoilers: general s5
Summary: Jack's first time. Half-crack, half-angst.
A/N: For previous Queen gottalovev, who loves first times. Title stolen from Warren Zevon's song.

Comments

[siluria]

LOL!!!! I won't say where my brain went, although I have a sneaky suspicion I'm not the only gutter-minded person reading this! ;) I read it twice just to indulge with the added knowledge!!

You win!!!! :D xxxx

[alemyrddin]

Hee. Let's say my mind went there too... ;)
Thank you so much hon, glad you liked! :)

[haldoor]

HAHHAHAHA, that's brilliant! We were all thinking the same thing until the last line, I'm sure! You wicked person, you!!! Excellent, excellent! ;-)

tiny typo you might want to correct: A different men looked back at him from the mirror. I think men here should probably be man.

[alemyrddin]

Oh thanks for the fix!

And I'm very glad you liked it and that it worked in fooling you till the end! ;)
Thanks for your kind words. :)

[zelda_zee]

LOL! This is awesome, hon!

[alemyrddin]

thank you very much! I'm glad I made you laugh!:D

[hitlikehammers]

Even with the description of "Half-crack, half-angst," I still kind of cough-giggled my amused disbelief in an exceptionally loud way when I reached the end :) This is definitely made of win.

[alemyrddin]

Heee. I'm so glad I managed to suprise and amuse you.
Thanks for you kind words!
:)