Comments | alemyrddin: Lost ficlet: Déjà Vu

alemyrddin

Lost ficlet: Déjà Vu

Jul 07, 2008 11:16

Written for LUAU 2008 Queen gottalovev at lostsquee, who wanted vacations.
(but it fits also Queen purestvixen's request for Sawyer)

Déjà Vu
Sawyer/Jack, PG, 278 words, unbetaed.

( Déjà Vu )

my fic, lost:sawyer, lost:jack, luau, lost

Comments 20

janie_tangerine July 7 2008, 09:38:02 UTC

Oh, NICE! I really liked it! Poor Jack's stomach though, I can see that that thing would upset it... even if I guess that he has the perfect antidote there ;)

Sawyer turned towards him, surprise and affection in his eyes. He lifted his hand to cup Jack’s face, and kissed the corner of his mouth.

“I know.”

Then, uncaring of the people in line, of their eyes on them, he pulled Jack tight towards him, kissing him properly.

AAAWWW! God, do I love them when they're like this? I do. Lovely job, I really liked it!

alemyrddin July 7 2008, 10:08:15 UTC

I can't resist having them happy. And if I go fluffy, who cares? I love making people go "awww".

thank you! I'm glad you liked. :)

astra2104 July 7 2008, 10:02:32 UTC

Wheeee! Rollercoaster ride ficlet!!!

*squeees*

Awesome! Plus how typically Sawyer:

“I know.”

Then, uncaring of the people in line, of their eyes on them, he pulled Jack tight towards him, kissing him properly.

Jack knew, too.

♥

alemyrddin July 7 2008, 10:10:19 UTC

thank you! I'm glad you liked!
And if it sounded somewhat in character, even better. ;)

and yeah, rollercoasters+ Jack and Sawyer, isn't that a great mix? :D

jenthegypsy July 7 2008, 11:38:18 UTC

Poor Jack! My stomach got queasy reading the description of the Déjà Vu, and I'm sitting safe and sound on my living room couch!

J/S fluff is always a good way to start a day. Thanks!

alemyrddin July 7 2008, 12:30:29 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you liked!

LOL, I actually love riding those kind of rollecoasters (even if I couldn't ride it twice in a row!) - but it definitely makes me feel queasy as well. :)

elliotsmelliot July 7 2008, 12:02:46 UTC

You trickster - making me think it was one thing, then another and then being completely wrong in both cases! I'm glad the luau kick started your muse and brought us this feel good fic. It was a lovely way to start my day.

alemyrddin July 7 2008, 12:31:29 UTC

heee! *happy dance* I'm so happy I tricked you. And that you liked it.
Thank you for reading and commenting. :)

inthekeyofd July 7 2008, 13:19:51 UTC

Rollar Coaster!!!!

Oh the luau is starting off really well already!!! That is so cute, seriously, I love that Saywer is all excited and Jack thinks that Sawyer had one hell of a great idea.

And that they kissed. *sigh*

alemyrddin July 7 2008, 17:08:44 UTC

yes, they had to kiss. *nods*

I'm very glad you liked it, thanks for reading and commenting. :)