Lost luau ficlet: Water forms

[alemyrddin]

Title: Water forms
Character: Jack, Kate, Aaron, Shannon, Boone, Ben.
Words: 250
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Lost is not mine.
Spoilers: S4 finale
Summary: Human body consists of 65-90% of water.
A/N: Four very short drabbles, I hope not too hermetic. For previous Queen astra2104, who requested "ice".

Comments

[janie_tangerine]

I think this was an awesome take on the prompt, and not too cryptic at all ;) the way you vowed the state of the water with their real physical state. My favorites are totally Boone's (ha, doubted it? The last line just broke my heart) and Ben's. Which in two lines was just perfect, fitting and so really IC. I loved these!

[alemyrddin]

thank you so much, I'm glad you liked this!
I must say that the last line was inspired. It simply sprung to my mind, and I built the whole ficlet around that. I'm guessing it shows. ;)

[siluria]

Nice idea with the stages of water, I really like the image of the water filling any gaps and healing itself.

[alemyrddin]

Thank you, I'm very glad you liked it.
I found intriguing to explore something as simple as water from different point of view. :)

[alemyrddin]

Thank you so much, you make me blush!
I'm so happy that you liked this and that it worked for you. :)

[astra2104]

Oh that was so cool! I love your take on the prompt, and each drabble fits so perfectly to the person you're describing, it's great!

I especially love the one about Boone and Shannon - Soft snow can toughen if held into a tight fist, or melt into a warm hand. - Beautiful!

Thank you so much for this, sweetie! ♥

[alemyrddin]

Thank you so much, I'm very glad you liked it.

It all started with the "ice" part, so it's all thanks to your queenly prompt! *bows*
;)

[elise_509]

This is beautiful, just beautiful. I especially love the water section. This is all downright poetic. :)

[alemyrddin]

Poetic, wow, that's a great praise!
Thank you so much, hon, I'm glad you liked it. :)