Comments | aleo_70: Numb3rs Fic: Chill, Chapter Three/3

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Numb3rs Fic: Chill, Chapter Three/3 - COMPLETE

Jun 03, 2010 12:24

Title: Chill
Author: aleo_70
Rating: PG 13+
Genre: Gen
Characters: Don, with cameos by Charlie, Alan, team
Challenge: Clue Challenge #8, February 2010. Prompts: Who? - Don. What? - Ice. Where? -Outdoors .
Disclaimer: I don't own them, I just borrowed them. Numb3rs and its characters are the property of those ( Read more... )

don eppes, numb3rs, fanfic

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zubeneschamali June 3 2010, 02:32:28 UTC

LOL, trust you to figure out a way to give Don hypothermia in the middle of L.A....nice scenario, and I'm glad he was rescued quickly by people who knew what they were doing.

aleo_70 June 3 2010, 02:42:48 UTC

Well I figure some luck has to go his way or else he wouldn't last long with the likes of us fanfic writers around the place!

pygmymuse June 3 2010, 03:12:41 UTC

Very nice. I enjoyed Don trying to get his message across to the agents, and they took good care of him. :)

Odds against frostbite in LA, lol. :)

aleo_70 June 3 2010, 03:39:17 UTC

Yeah, what would they be I wonder?

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aleo_70 June 3 2010, 03:41:42 UTC

His crinkling and the whole roast thing just happened. As usual, the best bits write themselves.

Starting to get a bit of a roll on the March challenge fic now, just one problem - I have no idea why the baddie is doing what he is doing.

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aleo_70 June 3 2010, 03:59:02 UTC

Thanks. I will bear that in mind.

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saphirablue June 3 2010, 06:57:49 UTC

=) A hypothermia fic! =) I love hypothermia fics! =)

I love idea of Don getting hypothermia in the middle of the summer in California! The idea how and why: great!

I love that you let Don be found by someoneelse than his team! I really liked that part! :)

Thank you for this fic!

aleo_70 June 3 2010, 15:59:46 UTC

Given the circumstances it made sense it would be someone other than his team.

Thank-you for reading!

valeriev84 June 3 2010, 08:44:29 UTC

Star Wars reference! Yay! I love it when my fandoms cross, even if just in a comment like here.

I love how you ended this and that you didn't have any of Don's team there, it's often just a little too convenient when that happens, especially that far outside of LA.

The bit at the end about the frostbite in LA was fantastic, they're never gonna let him live that one down, are they?

aleo_70 June 3 2010, 16:06:02 UTC

I just saw Don lying there swathed in bandages and that crazy hairdo came to mind. Only seemed right to throw it in. :)

Exactly. Don's team never came into it, it just didn't make any sense. He'd sent them home ready for all the work they had scheduled the next day so they were unavailable as backup. He had to rely on police and whatever agents happened to be on duty and closest the scene when the call for urgent assistance went out. Pure logic.

Only Don could manage that little effort. I don't blame Charlie for refusing to calculate the odds. I can see him in the running for the award for 'the most improbable thing to happen to an agent - 2010' at the staff Christmas party.

v_e_vancollie June 4 2010, 08:44:32 UTC

True, but they'd still have been there in a lot of fics.

Ooo!!! You really should write that now, that little scene you mentioned... come on, you know you want to. Teasing Don about the situation you've put him in. The agent presenting it can even say that it's the first time for it to have happened to an agent from that office in the summer!

aleo_70 June 4 2010, 10:35:23 UTC

Will add to the list... Maybe a Christmas fic?

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