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FIC: Practice

Nov 02, 2009 15:15

Title: Practice
Fandom: Codex Alera
Characters: Tavi and Kitai
Recipient: terioncalling
Word Count: 1100
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Up Until Captain's Fury
Prompt: Possibly a more expanded scene when Tavi is practicing with furies and Kitai jumps him.
Or Kitai just lounging off to the side making commentary whilst he tries.
Summary: Kitai watches Tavi practice his ( Read more... )

Comments 4

<3 terioncalling November 3 2009, 07:21:58 UTC

I love it! :D

Re: <3 snuggle_muggle November 3 2009, 08:08:52 UTC

I'm glad. I hope it was what you had in mind. It was fun to write.

priscellie November 3 2009, 13:11:28 UTC

Hee, what fun! I really enjoyed your take on them. I was a little thrown by Kitai refering to Tavi by name, as she's never once in the series used the name "Tavi," and only said "Octavian" once, to mess with Isana's head, but overall you did a great job capturing their dynamic. Well done!

priscellie August 17 2010, 03:17:33 UTC

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