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tigerkat24 in alera_ficathon

Fic: Never Saw It Coming

Nov 03, 2009 20:18

Title: Never Saw It Coming ( Read more... )

Comments 9

agilebrit November 4 2009, 05:02:35 UTC

Hee! This had me grinning like a loon. Well played. :D

"I lied." *sporfles*

tigerkat24 November 5 2009, 06:26:11 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

priscellie November 4 2009, 05:47:11 UTC

*tackles you with love*

Oh, Katness, this is magnificent! You absolutely nailed the characterization--I loved everyone every second they were on page. Excellent use of Noodles and boozahol.

tigerkat24 November 5 2009, 06:26:45 UTC

Noodle incidents are fun! So is likkered-up Max. Actually, Max all the time.

*tackles you with love right back*

c15page November 4 2009, 08:01:15 UTC

"That," Max said, disgruntled, "is evil. And clever. Stop being smart."

"No,"

I love you, that is all

tigerkat24 November 5 2009, 06:27:04 UTC

Thank you so much! :D I'm glad you enjoyed it enough to express your affection.

beckyh2112 November 5 2009, 21:04:02 UTC

Tavi blinked at him, looking confused, and then suddenly enlightened. "Oh. I lied. I don't need your advice, Kitai needed time to get into position."

This is possibly the best line in the history of the universe.

This fic made me giggle all through it; so much good in-character fun and silliness. Love the song you made up for Max to bellow. It really fit the 'verse. ^__^

moryssa November 9 2009, 22:11:04 UTC

This was awesome. :D

(and the "Stop being smart" line literally made me laugh out loud. :) )