This is adorable! I love the playfulness in each pair of character interactions. It's a bit of a stretch to imagine their courtship-of-sorts carrying on for nine years, but the sweetness of the payoff is an absolute delight.
Thanks so much for participating in the ficathon! And thanks for being the first brave soul to post. :D
I agree with the bit of a stretch but figured Veradis would want to be certain Max was being serious (since he is Max). Could see him slowly working his way into getting more and more time off as the work needed in Alera sort of tapered off over the years. Maybe not that long of a time but I really wanted a flying Desiderius in the background as Tavi's 'spy' once the idea hit me and that didn't seem feasible in my head with a lesser number of years.
Hey! I'm really sorry I took so long about responding; life got in the way.
That said. This is awesome! I love that Veradis played Max so beautifully, and I love that he clearly loves it. Oh, Max. You are well and truly caught. Great job, and thank you so much for writing this lovely story for me.
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Thanks so much for participating in the ficathon! And thanks for being the first brave soul to post. :D
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:D Here's hoping to see more postings soon!
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That said. This is awesome! I love that Veradis played Max so beautifully, and I love that he clearly loves it. Oh, Max. You are well and truly caught. Great job, and thank you so much for writing this lovely story for me.
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