Help?

[aletes_muse]

I know I haven't posted squat really ... well nothing but fic and a few random blabs and y'all probably hate me for doing this but I literally will get down on my knees and beg you all for some feedback on this. I wrote this a while ago -- about two months, I think -- with maybe two chapters after it and I have no idea whether it's worth working

Comments

[deessedumer]

I like it so far, and if you continued it I would read it. I'm curious to know what happened in the blanks between the jumps in time. Also, I'm a huge fan of angst fic, and it seems like this story well get pretty angsty in the next few chapters.

[aletes_muse]

Thank you :).

Yeah, the plan I had drew up for this was rather angsty and at the time it was something I really wanted to write. I guess it got bogged down under priorities because of the exams I was forced to had to sit.

I guess I should start writing more of it then. And get a more detailed plan drawn up :).

[lire_casander]

I'm liking this so far. I think this can be good if you continue.

[aletes_muse]

Thank you. I think I will continue it, actually. Ensure there's something there to sit and hammer the keyboard on when I'm feeling angsty, myself :).

[aletes_muse]

I had no idea it was poetic but now that you mention it, I kind of see it. Kind of. Then again, I always suck at interpreting things.

I think I'll continue it -- well, I'll try at least -- and then if it bombs I'll just post it as a one-shot. On communities and the like. Thank you, by the by, for telling me what you thought :)

[anonymous]

Absolutely fantastic beginning of story, what I crave to read more of.
I hope you will reappear soon, because I really love your stories and waiting with impatience for more chapters of them.

Argo