Due South: Out of the Box

[alex51324]

Title:  Out of the Box
Author:  Me
Rating:  PG-13, language
Pairing:  Fraser/RayK
Summary:  Ray can't figure out why Fraser is acting so weird.

A/n:  Not the time travel story, which I'm still working on.

Fraser was talking, probably telling some kind of caribou story--he had that serious look he got when he was doing that--but Ray wasn’t listening,

Comments

[lilac_one]

Very cute! Poor Fraser, thinking his attraction made Ray puke when it was only bad egg salad. I'm glad they worked it out.

[alex51324]

Egg Salad is wily! It just lives to ruin people's relationships. Glad you liked.

[spuffyduds]

Aw, sweet and funny! I especially like, "He first came to Chicago for reasons you don’t care about." Very Ray.

Psst, tiny typo--Ray's apartment is probably supposed to be "not the ideal venue" and it's "not the idea venue."

[alex51324]

Thanks, for the comment and the typo catch! **trots off to fix**

[alex51324]

Glad you liked! I have other projects in the work, but I don't plan to continue this story--I know the ending is kind of up in the air, but I wasn't planning a sequel--I just couldn't stick the landing and got tired of messing with it! There were enough other parts I liked that I decided to post it anyway.

[green_grrl]

“Okay, this time, skip the I said I said I said, and just say the thing that you said,” Ray suggested.

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Once again, you've written their voices perfectly, a case like it came from canon, and a romance that makes me grin from ear to ear. Adorable!

[alex51324]

Glad you liked! I've had the Australian Monarchists laying around in my head for a while, and decided it was finally time to use them. I had originally pictured them rappelling into a ballroom like ninjas, but eventually I decided on a slightly more realistic approach.

[mmmarmalade]

*sigh* Adorable. ♥

[alex51324]

Thanks!