Ivory Soap

Oct 05, 2019 17:58

Damp clothes drying ( Read more... )

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sweeny_todd October 7 2019, 11:08:47 UTC
It's very American. The imagery, while at the same time it feels much bigger than that. I like it.

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alexanderscttb October 7 2019, 18:46:06 UTC
Thank you!!

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cacophonesque October 7 2019, 21:36:08 UTC
I liked the mood here. And particularly the ending.

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alexanderscttb October 10 2019, 20:55:26 UTC
Glad it connected!

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adoptedwriter October 8 2019, 11:43:28 UTC
Thought-provoking. Nice work!

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alexanderscttb October 10 2019, 20:59:34 UTC
Thank you!

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bleodswean October 8 2019, 15:56:33 UTC
Imagery that is and it itself the poem because your imagery is the feeling! Nice work!

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alexanderscttb October 10 2019, 21:00:25 UTC
Many thanks!!

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shay_writes October 9 2019, 00:19:14 UTC
I enjoyed reading this.

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alexanderscttb October 10 2019, 21:01:19 UTC
I'm glad to hear it. Thank you!

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