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Ivory Soap
Oct 05, 2019 17:58
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sweeny_todd
October 7 2019, 11:08:47 UTC
It's very American. The imagery, while at the same time it feels much bigger than that. I like it.
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alexanderscttb
October 7 2019, 18:46:06 UTC
Thank you!!
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cacophonesque
October 7 2019, 21:36:08 UTC
I liked the mood here. And particularly the ending.
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alexanderscttb
October 10 2019, 20:55:26 UTC
Glad it connected!
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adoptedwriter
October 8 2019, 11:43:28 UTC
Thought-provoking. Nice work!
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alexanderscttb
October 10 2019, 20:59:34 UTC
Thank you!
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bleodswean
October 8 2019, 15:56:33 UTC
Imagery that is and it itself the poem because your imagery is the feeling! Nice work!
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alexanderscttb
October 10 2019, 21:00:25 UTC
Many thanks!!
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shay_writes
October 9 2019, 00:19:14 UTC
I enjoyed reading this.
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alexanderscttb
October 10 2019, 21:01:19 UTC
I'm glad to hear it. Thank you!
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