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screw dignity! rosynose April 1 2008, 17:28:22 UTC
I wouldn't hug him anyway. Look at what happened the last time he hugged someone (hint:charbroiled).
*gasp* Lookit Lent's dear hairy little legs! <3
Hmm, I found the top-middle panel of 31 a bit visually confusing at first - I think it's the background/angle. I love Soli mentally going 'fuck it' and kicking the door in though XD

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Re: screw dignity! alexds3 April 1 2008, 18:36:48 UTC
Baked, not fried!! haha

Yeah those panels don't flow well at all, I was just kinda going crazy with perspective, I'll try to restrain the urge next time XD

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alexds3 April 1 2008, 18:39:39 UTC
Yes they are rather cute! But more importantly, the new secretary of state is an excellent leader and personality :38 The old one sucks 3:

Haha, but Pinter has so little going for him! If I post him getting ogled there will be no recovering ;__;

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ming85 April 1 2008, 18:15:36 UTC
Oh i looove the key sequence! That last boot is hilarious. Who needs keys anyway. I really like the top part of running to the door, very dynamic, though I would make the transition between panel 2 and 3 a 11-5 angle (clock hours)instead of the 1-7 it is now, more space for the doorknob in panel2 ( ... )

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alexds3 April 1 2008, 18:34:01 UTC
Haha, thanks XD I think I need to make it clearer that those keys are different and wrong fits, I just scribbled it to fast I think.. and agreed about the running sequence, it was more cuz I wanted to draw a wacky pose than I did it cuz it makes sense <-- naughty

lol, yes that is a flower! Not Bob though (even though they look similar)... they are Les Fleurs du Mal, haha, its sort of lame but I still like it...

And thanks :3 I just finished sneaking out of the house to pay for the hosting, the layout still has its problems but hopefully the whole shebang will be up and running soon. As for mom thing, hopefully this giant fight will be over soon.

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alexds3 April 1 2008, 18:35:31 UTC
lol HUGZ

Yeah I keep forgetting that Soli is almost as obsessive as Luca is about her stuff... which eventually will make sense in terms of overall plot for now its still sort of scary XD

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candeldandel April 1 2008, 19:19:48 UTC
Good thing Luca got rid of his secretary of state... that old one looks like bad news to me.
I can see why you don't like these pages; they're very flat and uh... boring. The panels with Soli's foot and the key are also confusing because I can't tell which order to read them in... or even the correct order is a little subtle. I'm being kinda forward, but it's all good cause these are rough drafts anyway. ;) Do you know how long you're planning to make the entire series? It seems like it'll be pretty long by the end. I can't waiiiiit lalala!

Sigh, I got rickrolled today already :( DID YOU!?

AND NO SIR, I WILL NOT.

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alexds3 April 3 2008, 04:30:16 UTC
Pft, haha boring XD I was internally like NUUUU for an hour but then I went back and looked and yeah, a bit boring. But yes, what with the rough-draftiness of it all, this will all be ironed out by the end (or else its to the chopping block for me)

I'm sorry to hear about your rickrolling. I googled it and it sounds pretty awful :C

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