Comments | alfredaskew: Apocalyptic Survival Challenge: Part 3

alfredaskew

Apocalyptic Survival Challenge: Part 3

Feb 10, 2011 01:34

(Review the rules, and floor plan of the safe house.)
(Read Part 1.)
(Read Part 2.)

Four AM. Tuesday. The first day in the safe house.

( Read more... )

challenge, story

Comments 21

slicchic February 10 2011, 18:35:02 UTC

Oh Fif, I think you meant "exercise." Unless he's scaring the devil out of all your zombies XD

alfredaskew February 10 2011, 21:04:42 UTC

I we shall call this fail "Alfi's too lazy to correct a typo and mis-uses spellcheck."

I wish he could exorcise the zombies. That would be sweet.

whysimswhy February 10 2011, 23:03:21 UTC

I really love your story-telling, it's so cinematic. It's just a whole different style than what most people are doing, & I think it's an excellent example of how far we can stretch our creativity as Sims writers. Can't wait to read more of this! :)

alfredaskew February 12 2011, 09:00:36 UTC

Thank you. :)

cosmetical February 11 2011, 23:11:32 UTC

this is awesome, as per usual. I need not say more.

alfredaskew February 12 2011, 09:09:13 UTC

Thank you! As usual. :)

simtarts February 12 2011, 05:04:53 UTC

I've never seen grilled cheese look so atmospheric...

The matter of fact, report/journal style of narration actually makes this semi-distressing to read. As in tension, baby. I likes it.

alfredaskew February 12 2011, 09:23:59 UTC

xD

That's interesting... very good to know. Thank you!

pkheartznroses February 12 2011, 17:26:49 UTC

This is a great read, I agree with simtarts, so very atmospheric and the pics are great. I'll be following this one.