Comments | algernon_mouse: MCR Drabble Fic

algernon_mouse

MCR Drabble Fic

Oct 28, 2007 10:18

Comments 28

kickthebeat October 30 2007, 12:02:32 UTC

boys are so rotten. i suppose that's what makes them lovable, though? or these boys, at least; lovable in a very bratty, mean little boy way. you are awesome.

algernon_mouse October 30 2007, 13:07:19 UTC

Aw. I suspect that you're pretty awesome yourself.

daydreambeleevr October 30 2007, 14:19:05 UTC

Just read these again, from the top.

:deep happy sigh:

usually drabbles are too short to really make that much of an impression. Not these, though. They tell story. (and the pictures make me want to bite my tongue)

lovely.

Kerry =)

algernon_mouse October 30 2007, 14:21:08 UTC

Aw, as usual you are too kind.

slowlikewine October 31 2007, 04:57:23 UTC

Oh man, this kind of blew me away. I hope you don't mind that I'm sending people here from my journal to read this. It's just, I don't usually even read MCR fic (LOVE the music, but not really into the fic) but this is amazing. And I like how you added the pictures in as well, they help tell the story. I liked your phrasing too much to really pick out particular lines, but....okay, let me try to at least point out some of my favorite sections.

The last line of the first section, cause he so does. They all do.

The entire Marysville, CA section gave me chills. I might have moaned a little.

I loved the candy part. It feels like canon.

Frank in the shower, with the water, and the nipples, and the indecent groan. Jesus Christ.

Ray and Gee's characterizations in this fic are just spot on. I could hear their voices when I was reading it.

I read a fic about that once. hehe Gerard googled Frank's porn ( ... )

algernon_mouse October 31 2007, 13:13:01 UTC

Wow. Thank you so much for your comment. Feedback is always lovely but this gets it's very own guilded frame for safe keeping.

gigantic October 31 2007, 07:57:28 UTC

Oh, geez, this just works for me. I love the structure of it -- the drabbles and the pictures, and that last section kind of blows me away.

algernon_mouse October 31 2007, 13:13:53 UTC

Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this.

airgiodslv January 13 2008, 02:05:15 UTC

What a beautiful story. I love the pacing of it, and the fights and humanity and intimate moments, how real it felt, but also pared-down, stripped and gorgeous. That last line is just breathtaking.

algernon_mouse January 13 2008, 13:09:41 UTC

Thanks! I'm so thrilled you thought so.