Drabble: In Vino...

Aug 03, 2009 18:07

Title: In Vino....
Author: Alhendra
Prompt: Drunk
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 100
A/N: My first drabble ever, harder than I thought it'd be, so...be gentle xD

Ron didn’t drink. Aurors generally didn’t - why give your enemies the opportunity to find you with your guard down?
But he pretended to, regular as clockwork, every other day.

Because when he did ( Read more... )

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smellslikefail August 4 2009, 03:57:01 UTC
this is amazing for a first attempt.
so much imagery it so few words.

Draco would submit, and his eyes wouldn’t be hard orbs of unreadable silver, but would mellow into emotional stormy grey seas
this line blew me away.

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alhendra August 4 2009, 04:34:01 UTC
Thanks! :D I love Draco's eyes and I always have to swoon over them, no matter what I write! <3

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lokifan August 4 2009, 10:43:23 UTC
Lovely! I love the idea of Ron pretending to be drunk, and the smexy, subtle imagery.

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alhendra August 4 2009, 15:17:01 UTC
Thank you! I can totally see Ron going along with things because its the only way it'll ever work <3

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