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Drabble: Almost...Again.

Aug 05, 2009 06:26

Title: Almost..Again.
Author: Alhendra
Prompt: Does it count if I don't have any? xD
Rating: G
Word Count: 100
A/N: I blame you all if I get addicted to drabbles ( Read more... )

Comments 6

deathlydragon August 5 2009, 10:03:37 UTC

inviting a wild animal in, uhhhhh, love this sentence. Am I right that this was a dream, yeah?

Very nice, write more drabbles! :D

alhendra August 5 2009, 15:26:05 UTC

Haha! It could be! ;) Either way he's making Ron run around in circles <3

sexyscholar August 5 2009, 12:24:40 UTC

Guuuuuuuuuuuuh.

For some reason, this is the sentence that kills me over and over:

The moment stretched on.

GOD. I mean. It's so succinct, but it speaks volumes to me. I love it.

Of course it counts if it doesn't have a listed prompt! Sometimes the muse will just say, "Write this now," and we're compelled to do his/her bidding.

And hey, I'll happily accept all that blame if you become addicted to writing drabbles. I am loving your work!

alhendra August 5 2009, 15:27:43 UTC

xD Thank you! And yeah, my muse did more or less hit me with it this morning as soon as I woke up. Much love!

seraphimerising August 5 2009, 13:27:57 UTC

Wow. Very powerful while being succinct. I like Draco being described as a wild animal in his approach and his disappearance. It was perfect

alhendra August 5 2009, 15:29:40 UTC

Thank you! xD I had this image of Draco as a nervous skittish colt in my head - after all, he's not the bravest guy around.