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yoongrawr September 7 2012, 04:38:27 UTC
I thought this was going to be a two-shot story at most o.O but you're going to write more right Ms Ali? righttt? On-going perhaps?

So Tiffany wasn't always like that mmm~ I hope she can work things out with Jessica instead of running away..

Shorter than your usual chapters but I enjoyed it very much :) looking forward to see more JeTi here

PS: wth the prostitute stole her knife but not her phone? not her wallet? pshh silly woman she is

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ali_the_scwag September 8 2012, 17:09:53 UTC
lol. Jessica's such a bitch here. I would've ran away too. And yes, I am going to write more. I almost forgot how much I enjoyed writing. :) This will be my ongoing, I like this pairing it seems.

This is actually only a page shorter than my usual chapters too, I'm surprised you noticed the length. Hahahaha

PS: Thugs don't carry wallets, they carry suitcases. lmao Also, what use would that phone be to her? Prob has password and it's not like she can just call the cops to set her free. Bitch would get shot up and shit. This ain't no kindergarten.

PPS: You just contributed in pushing me to write more seriously. Thank you.

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snsdholic September 7 2012, 05:33:18 UTC
YOU'RE BACKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!! :D Welcome back! Indiana? Where did you live before if you don't mind me asking? o:
Wow, I was expecting you to only make this a two-shot, but I'm guessing it's longer - not that I mind at all!
Tiffany seems pretty scared for a drug dealer. I usually expect them to be fearless and just not give a fuck.
JeTi's interactions are so cute! Although slim, they're still cute.
I hope Jessica would be able to help Tiffany go back onto the right path and perhaps fall in love, hehe.
Update soon! ^^

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chinken September 7 2012, 19:11:01 UTC
Oh man, Indiana? That must really suck, I live in Kentucky, but I haven't heard anything wonderfully fun coming from Indiana. Haha.

I really like the continuation of DTMBIY, it gives more insight into Tiffany's life. I don't know what else to say, haha. Ella says I give bad comments, aka: "This story is cute."

Looking forward to your next update!

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ali_the_scwag September 8 2012, 17:17:41 UTC
Yesss, Indiana. orz
Dude, you'd be the first person I've ever talked to who's from Kentucky. These states have no wonderfully fun reputations at all. e_e
I like your username btw. lol. Chink-en.
Ella, Ella, Ella. lol, my chingoooo.
Thank you for anticipating my update!!

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ali_the_scwag September 8 2012, 17:18:12 UTC
I lived in California. :<
LOL. Drug dealers are people too! God, you readers are so shallow. You guys are the bitch ass Jessica in this fic to my awesome, desperately trying to live, Tiffany.
At the rate I'm going though, Jessica's gonna push Tiffany up the scale only by hurting her and inspiring her through her pains, which could lead to suicide.
Anyway, thank you for welcoming me back. :)

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This is the first chapter right? breezytrooper October 28 2012, 04:45:05 UTC
Excuse me while I cry.
TIFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF
Jessi wai so mean?

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Re: This is the first chapter right? ali_the_scwag October 28 2012, 05:29:44 UTC
LOL. This isn't the first chapter, it's that third. For your convenience though, here's the first. http://ali-the-scwag.livejournal.com/16786.html

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Re: This is the first chapter right? ali_the_scwag October 28 2012, 06:00:48 UTC
Second chapter*

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ystnsh_kikyou January 11 2013, 16:59:00 UTC
Awww that is so sad.
Jessica it just an ignorant kid.
Damn kids and their hormones, Jessica was on her period, right?? right?

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