this was really really good! its romantic in a super angsty way but thats all they have ever been since ch 1 lol i dont give feedback to stories and dont know what youre looking for but hopefully this is suffice~ thanks for your update!
Dude. I've wanted to stop writing this because the age difference was bugging the shit out of me. I always imagine Jessica as like, some twelve year old and Tiffany's twenty four. ;-; Also, the training bra isn't actually a training bra, it was just a joke being referenced from an earlier chapter. LOL. The shift was sudden, but I hope it wasn't out of the blue and threw you off. Was it out of characterization?
Wau... this fic is so... awesome... Well first... they age difference between them is... big... no terribly big ... but big jajajaja But... i imagined tiffany trying to contain her wants for jessica because she's still a teen.... and... waaauu thats gonna be really... hard jajajaja
Well i love how you writte... I'm your fan... I read a lot of your works...:) I hope you keep writting... :D
I wish it was longer. /lol greedy reader I know someone already said this, but I agree with them. It's angsty, but somehow cute. A bit of an angry relationship but I guess it kind of shows how passionate they are(?) Lol, I like it though, it makes it not boring. They're passionate about one another and it comes sweetly and painfully. Tiffany's so demanding, lmao, it's funny though and so her. I hope Jessica will accept Tiffany dealing drugs or Tiffany stops. Either is fine. So their relationship's gonna be on the dl? Age gap... Personally, I don't care, but it is a bit awkward when one's underage. It looks less weird when they're both legal with age gap. Well, it's JeTi and they're cute so by all means! Thanks for the update and update soon! (:
SINCE IT'S JETI, IT'S OKAY FOR AN ADULT TO HAVE SEX WITH A CHILD. I CAN'T. LOL. I'm glad you're enjoying this. I personally am uncomfortable with the fact Jessica's sixteen. I'm not exactly looking forward to writing statutory rape, but since it's JeTi, it's alright, right? Rofl. x) You know I can't answer your questions without spoiling the whole fic, despite the inspiration you're giving me on how I should now answer people when they ask what will happen next. Do you really want me to tell you that they're gonna keep their relationship discreet and private and that Tiffany's going to stop dealing for Jessica? Hm?
Well, since you put it like that... xD Based on how they are now, I highly doubt Tiffany would wait two years. Have fun with writing that! However it comes out, I'm sure you'll make it an interesting read! (: I gave you inspiration? Aww, as trivial as that is, first time author to say so, so it means something to me. Ahaha, you're right. I'll just wait and see then and hope soon! :D
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Well first... they age difference between them is... big... no terribly big ... but big jajajaja
But... i imagined tiffany trying to contain her wants for jessica because she's still a teen.... and... waaauu thats gonna be really... hard jajajaja
Well i love how you writte...
I'm your fan... I read a lot of your works...:)
I hope you keep writting... :D
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I know someone already said this, but I agree with them. It's angsty, but somehow cute. A bit of an angry relationship but I guess it kind of shows how passionate they are(?) Lol, I like it though, it makes it not boring. They're passionate about one another and it comes sweetly and painfully. Tiffany's so demanding, lmao, it's funny though and so her. I hope Jessica will accept Tiffany dealing drugs or Tiffany stops. Either is fine. So their relationship's gonna be on the dl? Age gap... Personally, I don't care, but it is a bit awkward when one's underage. It looks less weird when they're both legal with age gap. Well, it's JeTi and they're cute so by all means!
Thanks for the update and update soon! (:
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