part 32

Mar 30, 2006 02:28

....dunno if this is the end or not,
i hope not because it's so sappy it makes me hurt.

here

senses )

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bluewings5 March 30 2006, 00:41:01 UTC
*breaths out* whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
That was just... whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaa wonderful @_@;

I love how you described each sense and all @_@

I LOVE IT!!!

And YES FINALLY @ end of part =DDD~

Whaaaaa just wonderful @_@ *reads again*

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negiyou March 30 2006, 13:51:36 UTC
it's hard to comment on this...

Just this much: I've never ever read about a kiss that was so described so well and touching. Damn, I want to kiss them, too... don't care whom!
It's so warm and comfy... it's hard to express what I want to say... mayb it's like that feeling you had as a little kid, standing before the christmas tree, all warm inside, and you still believed in the magic of the moment... that soft tickle deep inside... I just can pray you know what I try to explain here....

"I know"
He knows, he knew... I was smiling when I read this, it made me so happy! It's not the same as "i love you, too", its much more intimate. He knows, he sensed, he felt Aijis love for him long ago. It sounds soothing and assuring... somehow...

I really like it, as I told you already! *hugz* I'm proud of you, and I'm so happy you agreed writing this collab with me!

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matsudaira April 3 2006, 20:56:40 UTC
Absolutely. Perfect. The kiss. The feelings. Everything.
Over and out.

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