too much rp.

[aliale]

this is what happens when I get to play Kirito ><

these lines were said by Sue, she allowed me to quote ^.^ thanks honey!

anyway's Kirito's POV.
and the rest is up to you

Comments

[bluewings5]

whaaaaaaaaaa ;_; very beautiful written ;_; *sniffs* ;_;

[aliale]

*hands tissue* ._.

[bluewings5]

*sniffles* ._. now jun is even more in a crisis if he reads this... *laugsh* XD

[aliale]

uuugh this isn't supposed to influence the rp!!! ><
the rp influenced me, that's all!

[negiyou]

O~h mymy Kirito! *sniff*
Okay, I try to be as.... Sue as possible about that FF now and comment myself. *puts Jun into the closet and turns the key twice*

This, my dear wifey, is heartbreaking. Or is the very heart already broken? I think so... I don't even want to imagine what he endures, listening/watching all their lovey-dovey stuff all the time, I don't want to know how he felt during that concersation about that night. (*kicks the screaming closet*)
You managed to express his emotins very Kirito-like, I must say. I can't quite tell how you did it, but the way you wrote the Kiritistic view differs from the Aijistic one. Your style adjusts to the characters you write about, that's a sign of a real genious!
I nearly forgot about those lines you quoted, tell me, did you save that whol rp or do you know them by heart? (*kicks screaming closet again*)
I'm deeply impressed, I really am.
And my fingers are twitching with the urge to write the Junish part... but I don't know if I can stand being the copycat of this family again >.Okay

[aliale]

aah...I just felt like that while we were rp-ing...*hits head on the desk*
I think I really am schizo ><

*couhgs* well...
I don't know if this is asign of real genious, I just... wrote what I felt >< I mean, when I write Aiji, it's something I have to make up somehow. And Kirito just...came out naturally. I really felt like crying when there was that conversation going on >< he's just ... I don't know, I made him so damn stubbor. Like it would cause his world to collaps if he did admit that he's lonely, that he needs someone close to hold and in a way take care of him. Stupid proud Kirito...
I actually know those lines by heart. Dunno why really, they just gotten to me so damn much. *hits head on desk repeatedly*

yey for typos! *corrects mistake*
and who knows what goes on in Kirito's bedroom anyway *snickers*

Jun, you cute dork...*laughs lightly*

[spider_tears]

so sad so sad... you've made me all teary eyed!!!

[aliale]

I made myslef sad while writing this.... *pouts*

[spider_tears]

than you should write something happy!!!

[aliale]

*chuckles* well I thought this would go nicely with the fluffy one I posted a couple of days ago.
first fluff, now angst...*shakes head*

[omen1x2]

*sniffle* Poor Kirito...

Now I have to go write a happy fic, so Kirito can be happy.

It was lovely, though, don't get me wrong. Beautiful. Just... *sniffle* TT_TT

[aliale]

*sighs*
yeah... I felt so damn sad for him... I felt like crying when I was writing this *gets a tissue*
yeah you go an make Kiri happy ^^

*hugs* thanks for reading hun ^.^

[kyuichi18]

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Wahhhhh *tears spilling* Poor baby!!! ;_;

I loved it! ;_;

[aliale]

sankyu~!

i had tears in my eyes when I wrote it ><

[kyuichi18]

Awwww *huddles together* ;___; Sad but hope to see more <3

[aliale]

ah well, the finishing part is alreayd up ^^