Collab no. 2 - the beginning!

[aliale]

alright! let's get this thing started!

It took me so damn long to finally write the first part.
anyways, since there's more ppl in this collab than the one before, to anyone who's interested in reading,
there characters are:
Aiji - bluewings5
Jun - negiyou
Kirito/Kohta - aliale (yes, I'm in for a split Murata identity crisis XD )

first part up the, Kirito's POV.

Comments

[bluewings5]

woooooooooooooooow *.*
What a grea start *.*

I love how you described their acting and all *.*

Woooonderful *.*

[aliale]

great not great, at least IT'S A START XDDDD

[bluewings5]

it IS a GREAT starT XDDDDD *giggles*

[matsudaira]

Smart move getting rid of Takeo at the beginning *pouts a bit* Aiji seems like a lost puppy Q_Q Maa, it's lovely, I can't wait to see how it develops! You write so damn good Kirito, but you already know that...

[aliale]

we'll see if I make an equally good Kohta *laughs*

[negiyou]

Bwahahahaha!!!! First things first: ged rid of the fifth wheel XDDD Sorry Takeo, no offense XDDD

Anyway.
I was damn curious how you'd write part one, and as expected you pulled all the strings to make me smile, cringe and twitch at the same time. True genious, but that's nothing new, ne?
I could tell you I love your Kirito again, but I just want to explain why:
I wouldn’t be a good leader though, if I couldn’t sense more than they offer to show me.

I wouldn’t be a good friend if I didn’t see how tense every fiber in Aiji was, as he tries damn hard to keep his gestures and moves collected.

I wouldn’t be a good soul mate if I didn’t see that Jun is trying his damn hardest not to jump up and bounce.

I wouldn’t be a good brother if I didn’t feel how badly Kohta wants to turn around and gaze at the vibrant one.That's a piece of art itself! Expressing his way of life and the view he has about his own position in the band... the always transparent frontiers, band-family, combined in several ways, yet something completely different. ANd

[aliale]

I'll start feeling sad for Takeo soon..... go kick the can boy...

soo..
in other words - Kirito the wise-ass XDD
besides that was smth I didn't try out till now, so....*shrugs*

i'm really glad you like it ^^ you know what I think about Kirito in me XD
let's see how Kohta will work out XDD

and I'm happy too! this is going to be fun! Dunno how long this thing will be though, but I klnow that our family will pull something great!

[matsudaira]

*rebell mode on*

[aliale]

omg baby you rule XDDDD
*laughs so damn hard*