Last one...

[aliale]

yeeey finally I can end this.
last part for the gazette_yaoi challenge

Reita x Uruha. Theme #1: Lust, #4: future not promised.
Uruha's POV.

Comments

[negiyou]

This is.... well, I don't think it's sad... it's calm and it's just comfy. I think so somehow *shrugs* I mean, being together with somebody who can promise you a bright future is boring and easy. being together with somebody, hwo can't promise everything will be all right, proves love, doesn't it? In good and in bad times.

Next time, I'll just write ---I read it--- under your FF, cause I'm repeating myself every time anyway.

[aliale]

if you'll write that I'm gonna do some serious ass-kicking *pouts*
i want criticism!

[kiku_kitten]

Darling...
That... it was joyous and painful at the same time. Fear and fearless drive... a budding thought of love overwhelmed by lust... I think... Uruha also means that what the future brings is nows and as long as Rei is with him... then those nows are all that matter... because I wonder, awoken now, if he had no Rei with him, would all thoses nows become days of dark and sad clouded futures? .... I need to stop eating Twizzlers at 9 am....
*luffs on you* Loved it!

[aliale]

*allows herself to be luffed*

sunshine, if you have such thoughts after reading a piece I wrote, it makes me damn proud.
i'm so deseprate to give my words more meaning, to make my fics more deep...
meh, thank you so much *bows*

[kiku_kitten]

*chuckles*
Your words are always so beautiful. And you also are able with that beauty to get a point across... not everyone who can use pretty words can make a point with a razored edge. You can. *hugs* That is the true talent. Depth is in the point, in the meaning, the beauty is a glaze to make it easier to take. (( A spoonful of sugar, after all... ))
*snoodles*

[aliale]

I guess I'm in need of as much sugary sweet words at the moment as possible *sighs heavily*
thank you.

[aiji_kun]

Ahh~..I know that part...dunno why..XDD"*rofl* It's cool to be your beta XD" ..Even if Idon't know if I'm a good beta ._.

I love the picture of uruha nuzzling in Reita's Hair..somebody should draw a fanart.

"Maybe we are making things more and more worse for us.
Maybe we won’t be able to cope with this.
Maybe our future will end sooner than we predict."

I love this part. To risk everything for your love,even if you are unsure what tomorrow will bring or if everything will be good as today. Just to try it because you love somebody

[aliale]

XDDD you're a good beta ^^ *pets*

well if anyone it better be someone with talent XD

thank you schnuggi *huggles*
maybe I don't know what love means, but I guess it's worth taking a risk each day brings ^^" after all, this kinda mirrors the name of my LJ - per aspera ad astra (through torns to the stars)

[aiji_kun]

yeah..if you feel that the love you feel towars somebody is not worth risking something than it's kind of ..no real love~

[aliale]

*claps hands*
exactly.
sad but true I dare to say.

[afatal_illusion]

zOMG prose ♥

[aliale]

^^'
i'm a sucker for prose soo...that's the result ^^

[afatal_illusion]

aha! woot for prose! it's like the best kind of writing in t3h world~
♥♥

[aliale]

...it's the only way I can write actually ^^"

[prince_ryu]

Zomgosh. That was so.. beautiful. *tears* So sad it ended tough. ( ; ___ ; )

[aliale]

well..there were only 4 parts for the challenge soo...^^"

thanks for reading hun *huggles tight*