BSG fic: Free Association

[alias424]

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[alias424]

Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

[snoopy0917]

wow. that was just brilliant. loved it. just...love

[alias424]

Thank you! :)

[unavitasegreta]

Less thought, more Mmmm indeed! I loved this! Their banter and flirting mixed in with Bill's thoughts and his attention span were so much fun to read. I love all the kissing and the bonding between the two of them in 'their' room at night. I hope this is what they do during the time we (and the fleet) don't see them!

[alias424]

I'm having a really hard time leaving 'their bedroom.' Not that they really ever need to be anywhere else, in my opinion (though I'm sure they'd appreciate some time alone). But there's just way too much potential there. And I'm so glad you thought the banter worked---I had a bit of a hard time getting them to talk, if you know what I mean....

[unavitasegreta]

Leaving their bedroom? Uhm, no, they don't need to leave. They've got a lot of lost time to make up for in there!

[alias424]

Heh. I'm glad you think so. Let's just lock them in there forever and throw away the key---or at least hide it until they've had sufficient alone time, lol.

[tjonesy]

I'm in awe.

Too many fabulous lines to quote, and I'm still trying to assimilate the whole story. How did you do that?

[alias424]

I really have no idea. It wasn't at all what I sat down to write---it was like my brain took off without me. I'm just relieved it seemed to come up with something that worked.

[larsfarm77]

An amazing read - loved all the little moments and the description was beautiful, especially the laughter.

Wonderful.

[alias424]

Thank you so much. Laura's laughter (or MM's--she should probably get some of the credit) is just fantastic, isn't it?