Chaos Theory: Chapter 5

[alias424]

 Hi, all! Sorry for the wait on this one, but with it being the last chapter, the perfectionist in me reared its ugly head and just couldn't let this go until some parts were justright. Or at least close, lol. This one goes out to 

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Fantastic Story

[captaintish]

I love the sense of humor in your writing style --

--Had there been any reported deaths by cleavage within U.S. jurisdiction?

--His imagined death glare wasn’t going to cut it-he’d tried before, numerous times.

Hee, Brenda! I love how you incorporated her into this fic. She rocks.

Okay, so I'm reviewing here at LJ this time because I've got a question -- What do you have in mind for your next fic? :)

[alias424]

Brenda DOES rock, doesn't she? Such an awesome character to work in.

Absolutely nothing, actually. Which is a litte strange.

[gidget_zb]

This was war-explosions and fire and evasive maneuvers: everything but the trenches

I bow down, srsly. I LOVE that image and it fits them so perfectly. And if it's going out to me, I'll take it. *MINE*

I loved the succubus and the confusion in his thought and how he wasn't even paying attention to anything she was saying. PERFECT.

I love your House. and you. Just sayin'.

AWESOME.

[alias424]

Um, the only way you can bow down to me is if you can do that and write at the same time. Seriously.

So glad you liked the confusion. I was trying to get that across without it being, well... too confusing, lol. *shrugs*

[u_fisch]

... Nothing. Zip. Zilch. ...
Some alien life-force had invaded my brain and taken momentary control ...

You are great!

[alias424]

Ha! Thanks!

[wanderlonely]

::sighs happily:: That's just perfect, luv it. ♥

[alias424]

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

[angiescully]

SQUEE!! Haven't read this yet, but I've been waiting for you to finish it so I could read it all in one sitting! WHICH I WILL DO. AND COMMENT AGAIN ONCE I HAVE. :D

[alias424]

Yay!! But all in one sitting? Yikes! Well at least it's not very long. Comparatively. :)

[angiescully]

I love reading stuff all in one sitting. LOL Seriously, I don't have the patience for waiting most of the time, so if I know it's gonna be finished fairly soon, I usually wait for the rest. :)

[alias424]

You're good. I don't think I'd have the patience to NOT read chapters of certain stories like three seconds after they're posted. :) No willpower. At all.