Comments | alias500: no particular challenge: "Dark Horse"

yahtzee63 in alias500

no particular challenge: "Dark Horse"

Mar 22, 2011 21:36

527 words. Set in either late S1 or early S2.

( Dark Horse )

misc fic, author: yahtzee

Comments 9

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yahtzee63 March 23 2011, 04:16:14 UTC

Thanks muchly! How Jack looks at others is a fun way to look at Jack. If that made sense.

sunshine_queen March 23 2011, 04:39:40 UTC

Aw, Jack! I love that he came to like Will due to that trait.

yahtzee63 March 23 2011, 04:59:01 UTC

I doubt there's any quality Jack appreciates more than Worship of Sydney. :D

nomadicwriter March 23 2011, 09:42:36 UTC

I love this. So Jack.

yahtzee63 March 23 2011, 21:20:39 UTC

Thanks muchly! I miss him.

cassi0pei4 March 23 2011, 13:30:32 UTC

Aww...Jack, for what it's worth, I backed Will early on as well. He was such a great guy and he was so clearly head over heels for Sydney, who couldn't love him?

This was a great snapshot of Jack's protectiveness and Will's devotion. I really enjoyed it. :)

yahtzee63 March 23 2011, 21:21:30 UTC

I came in late and so knew that Vaughn had won the boy contest -- but I still kinda went for Will. Those eyes.

Obviously Jack has more exacting requirements.

apagon March 29 2011, 05:17:34 UTC

hi yahtzee, I'm so happy you are still writing in alias... as always, I love how you write jack... you've really come to know how he thinks, what matters to him, what makes him tick and sometimes I wish alias was all about jack because jj really makes him make interesting choices with his life but the psychology behind it all... well, you are the one that makes it all make sense and made me love jack best even when he's inscrutable... thanks for the excellent read :D

yahtzee63 April 4 2011, 21:41:19 UTC

Thanks so much! I still love my Jack Bristow, that's for sure, so I am glad you still enjoy the fics about him.