Don't you hate it when you get a story in your head and it won't leave you alone until you write it? This thing has been plaguing me all morning.
It's the type of story
snoopygirll hates. It doesn't explain what happened to Jack, it switches back and forth in POV, and I bet there are a lot of grammatically errors because I wrote it quickly and reviewed it
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WHAT HAPPENED TO JACK????
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But don't worry, we are trying to co-write a story together, but it's going slowly. She keeps on taking out all the good parts. :(
WHAT HAPPENED TO JACK????
He was attacked by eels. Big, walking, electric eels. And they don't like strangers and they zapped Jack.
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Can't wait for your co-written story.
Maybe you should post the outtakes or something after you two posted the story. We don't want those good parts get lost, do we?
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It's the type of story snoopygirll hates.
How can you say that?! *pouts* PWP isn't about plot, it's about intimacy and and...and intimacy. *eyes glaze over* I enjoyed this, although there are certainly grammatical errors, starting with 'bo-bos' instead of 'boo-boos' *g* But as a brain-fart it's rather pretty. Plus...tentfic, mmm, one of my fravrite kinks.
I nearly missed this - you should come poke me if I miss any of your J/D stories - I'll always want to read them. :)
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