for each man kills the thing he loves,

[alice_candy]

Yet each man does not die.

Comments

[sweety8587]

that was disturbing and yet beautiful at the same time.

When you write stuff like this...and i think ive said this before, it reminds me so much of Stephen King and thats too DAMN AWESOME in my books.

Its so...deeply disturbing that it just...upsets you at some level and makes you kinda inch away or stay away from the story after reading it yet you keep coming back again for that feeling you get while reading it.

this makes me think of the line "beautiful madness" or somethin like that cause thats what this was....a whirling maddening fall into the land of crazy love.

totally awesome as always alice-chan :D

[sweety8587]

this is like a decent into madness while laughing merrily all along the way. and by gar i want seconds and thirds :D

[alice_candy]

lol~ well, i think your stuff is dark as well. :))

[xelijahbabe07x]

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Goodness my dear, that was just......wow! I loved it! I just....it flowed so well. I really felt for Ichigo. How horrible. =( & poor Orihime (Gin you fiend {I love his evil backside though, lol}).

Seriously honey, fantastic! <3333333333333333

[alice_candy]

THANK YOU SO MUCH! ♥♥
i'm glad you like it! (and didn't hate me for it ;p)

[tinni]

Wow! This was just insane! Poor Ichigo. Well done.

[alice_candy]

Oh! i am surprised to see your comment but thanks so much for your comment ♥

insane, huh? :3 thank you!