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alicorn9

[Fic] A Moment

Sep 03, 2006 21:25

Title: A Moment
Fandom: Naruto
Rating: G
Pairing: Kakashi/Iruka
Summary: Iruka ponders.
Disclaimers: Naruto belongs to Masashi Kishimoto. I merely borrow his characters.

Note: This has been written right now. As in right in the LJ update box. So please don't kill me because it's unbetad. I use the spell check, but that's about it.

( A Moment )

kakairu, fic

Comments 4

be_be_waltz September 4 2006, 01:46:07 UTC

That was short and sweet. In my opinion, it's perfect.

Great job, and kudos to you for writing it on the spot. :3

alicorn9 September 4 2006, 03:26:23 UTC

Thanks! I'm really just trying to get back in the mood to write.

And getting complimented by one of my favorite writers just made my day!

mija711 September 5 2006, 07:13:09 UTC

that was soo sweet and packed full of emotion for such a small peice, I always become awed by people who can pack so much in so little words, it was a wonderful read, ty for that, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

alicorn9 September 6 2006, 13:22:42 UTC

Thanks for the review! I'm glad that you think that my writing's good. Maybe I'll try a longer bit next time? =3