Comments | alienconcept: sometimes i wish i could just sleep

alienconcept

sometimes i wish i could just sleep

Mar 26, 2008 21:12

he sees you now. now like now has ever been. tawdry and disappointing as you ever had wished against. and he looks at you again, in confirmation of something or nothing, and you smile and nod, say, "ummm..." because even though you know exactly, you want to just, maybe, just lengthen this process a little longer ( Read more... )

Comments 4

crouchea March 27 2008, 17:03:54 UTC

This was good!

I preferred the start to the ending, but honestly, good stuff.

alienconcept March 27 2008, 17:06:47 UTC

i thought the ending was kind of the same to the beginning but thanks for reviewing! THANKS A BUNCH :DDD

crouchea March 27 2008, 17:10:02 UTC

I think it's cos you wrote I want to **** you. Whilst I can see the character saying that, I just squirmed a bit. Cos I'm a prude. :D

alienconcept March 27 2008, 18:02:28 UTC

haha.

i guess he said he wanted to fuck him was because

because he could and because he wanted to see him squirm as well.

xo

ps, HAVE FUN AT WORDS AND MUSIC!!! LULLLLZ.