Very well put together. In that short bit of time, I got a feel for both characters and how the scene played out. I could also see events going like that. I think I also might want a second pare of eyes to verify my numbers before making the trip to Tallahassee. I like it.
I'm rapidly expanding my character list as I write, and its getting really wide really fast. I think I need to narrow the friends out a bit, and focus more on Abi.
Its going to end up with a romantic story line, and I just finished introducing the guy. But before they can meet again, the girls are having a shopping spree in NYC.
Now I have a better idea of what authors mean when they say they write to see whats going to happen next. I really hope that the guy and Abi hit it off. Otherwise I'm not sure why he's in it. :)
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PS -- Yesterday was so great. Glad you had time for lunch and talk!
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Anyway, I'll write some more then post some more. LOL....
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I'm rapidly expanding my character list as I write, and its getting really wide really fast. I think I need to narrow the friends out a bit, and focus more on Abi.
Its going to end up with a romantic story line, and I just finished introducing the guy. But before they can meet again, the girls are having a shopping spree in NYC.
Now I have a better idea of what authors mean when they say they write to see whats going to happen next. I really hope that the guy and Abi hit it off. Otherwise I'm not sure why he's in it. :)
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