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[alinaisablemish]

“Excuse me sir,

But you must understand,

you’ve taken my feelings

and by holding my hand.

I can’t seem to place why,

But I just can’t lose grip,

I’ve almost all my feel

And I’m starting to slip.

I know you can help,

And please, but you must.

Why do I crave hurt,

And to feel not it’s absence?

I want to shed tears,

To cry

Comments

[steprincess]

i really REALLY like feeling off the afterglow
it feels i could relate to that one best.

and
i like circles but spirals are better is beautiful.
all i can say is
keep writing
youve got a great sense of placing words in a very unique and descriptive placement.

thank you for letting me in
♥