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alionforalamb

I'll Be Watching You

Jun 07, 2010 12:52

Title: I'll Be Watching You
Author: alionforalamb
Pairing: Rachel/Quinn
Word Count: ~1900
Rating: R, for emotionally upsetting material.
Summary: All Quinn can do is watch.
Author's Notes: So I was all set to do a song fic, not planning on anything too terrible, and then bam! ITunes shuffles to 'Every Breath You Take' by Sting. That was the inspiration ( Read more... )

Comments 22

hippo_crat June 7 2010, 21:27:17 UTC

First of all appropriate song is appropriate. "Every Breath You Take" always creeps me out and in this story Quinn creeped me out too. But in a sad way.

Because that was sad beyond belief. Why is Quinn such as dumb head?

So in my head Rachel and Quinn cross paths again (thanks to Brittana) and Quinn grovels for forgiveness and Quinn's parents die in a fire.

Still sad though, note use of 'sad' icon.

alionforalamb June 8 2010, 01:10:19 UTC

Yeah, the song always gave me mild creeps.

I think Quinn's a dumb head because she has even more of a pathological need to be accepted than even Rachel.

I did try to leave it open-ended (several people have informed me that I should write a happier sequel, so I tried.)

hippo_crat June 8 2010, 01:47:49 UTC

"Yeah, the song always gave me mild creeps."
And yet I still sing along whenever its on the radio, go figure...

"she has even more of a pathological need to be accepted than even Rachel."
*borrows from Mercedes' well of stereotypes* Bitch has issues */end stereotype*

So my happy world could totally exist?

alionforalamb June 8 2010, 07:21:09 UTC

I totally sing along with it too. It may be creepy, but it's also catchy.

ashlessica1235 June 7 2010, 23:12:56 UTC

im sad now... why did you make me sad? there will be more right? if theres not ill be more sad

pucks09 June 8 2010, 00:55:25 UTC

agreed. how about a follow-up with "every little thing she does is magic" for good measure. yes?

alionforalamb June 8 2010, 01:11:38 UTC

Oh, I was thinking of just using shuffle and see what the itunes gods deem an appropriate sequel.

We'll see.

alionforalamb June 8 2010, 01:11:04 UTC

Duly noted, I will attempt to make you less sad.

I'm considering the possibility of a sequel.

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alionforalamb June 8 2010, 07:22:56 UTC

Yeah, Quinn has...well, parental issues.

Sequel may be coming.

perpetualblyss June 8 2010, 03:52:09 UTC

Oh this definitely needs a sequel or continuation that has a happier ending; after much groveling by Quinn of course.

alionforalamb June 8 2010, 07:22:16 UTC

Yeah, she's gonna have to try REALLY hard to fix that shit.

helionwolfchild June 8 2010, 04:24:47 UTC

We so need to have Quinn stumbleing, maybe literally, across Rachel. Or Rachel showing up randomly at Quinns, Give us something.

alionforalamb June 8 2010, 07:21:57 UTC

Alright. I will consult with the shuffle gods and see what iTunes decides.