Comments | alionforalamb: Tell Wind and Fire Where to Stop (4/15)

alionforalamb

Tell Wind and Fire Where to Stop (4/15)

Sep 17, 2010 23:29

Title: Tell Wind and Fire Where to Stop
Author: alionforalamb
Pairing: Rachel/Quinn
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~2600
Summary: Mistress Christine educates Quinn on submission.
Author's Note: Smut. Bondage. Discovery. Also, disclaimer. I don't really know a ton about BDSM or D/s, and I am fairly certain this does not paint an accurate portrait of what ( Read more... )

Comments 17

nork_ftw September 18 2010, 06:49:40 UTC

Wait, why did Rachel feel guilty? I'm confused lol. I really like this story and the concept though :)

alionforalamb September 18 2010, 06:58:07 UTC

Well, she doesn't want to reveal her identity to Quinn, which means she can't see her again. Also, professionally speaking, it's sort of a no-no to actually genitally stimulate or be stimulated by a client, from what I've heard.

nork_ftw September 18 2010, 08:39:41 UTC

Ooooh damn forreal? But Rachel can find a way around it right? I've seen porn where the Mistress makes the sub give her oral but then again this was some super hardcore shit that traumatized me for life lmao

miss_darkmoon September 18 2010, 06:59:59 UTC

Holy shit :D

Awesome story; amazing concept; I can't wait to see more of this! :D

And I did like that Rachel said she shouldn't be doing that, haha! A mistress never uses her mouth XD

moonspoken September 18 2010, 08:03:57 UTC

Ugh this is so incredibly hot. And it feels like it's panning out really naturalistically. I cannot wait for more!

mjacton September 18 2010, 15:53:08 UTC

That was hot!

Rachel really went off the rails quick, didn't she? But I noticed she did keep enough control not reveal who she was.

Can't wait for more.

alw_123 September 19 2010, 05:10:02 UTC

Freaking Brilliant. Love it :) Want more...like right now