Word Vomit: Alison writes whatever comes to mind.

[alison_swift]

Just an excersize I wanted to try

Comments

[sockmonkeyhere]

WOW. You are an amazing writer! Reading this was like sliding down a water slide and through a misting hose; it just tumbles down the page.

One of my favorite lines is this:

we're all suffering moment by moment of insanity and outsanity and upsanity and downsanity and side-to-sidesanity

It's such a clever and poetic use of free verse! The entire piece is a work of art. You should submit it somewhere for publication! :D

[alison_swift]

G'aw gee, you're so nice. <3 Thankyou so much, Socky!!

I'd never thought of submitting it, it was mostly just word vomit. I'd like to try it as a monologue, buuuut...